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Feb. 19th, 2006

02:45 am

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Date:February 19th, 2006 07:48 am (UTC)
I think 0.8 is probabably mm since 0.8cm is 8mm, almost a magic marker!

If you flipped the first speech bubble ("so your not..") to be in centre top thn it would be clear where to start. I think the alternating heights tells you how to read them fine.

What about the firt panel being a close up of the alarm clock? That would alleviate the need for the bar and provide a panel thats a little bit different.

Just some thoughts.
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Date:February 19th, 2006 01:35 pm (UTC)
Thanks - I think you're right about the units. As for the alarm clock, the thing is that I wanted to emphasise that it was Valentine's Day, so I still need the bar for that.
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